翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

返事をありがとう。

私が買った２０個のヘルメットの記録をエクセルでお送り

しますのでもうしわけございませんが、それぞれのヘルメットの

安全規格をエクセルに記入してください。

日本の経済産業省にお願いされました。

もうしわけございません。

よろしくお願いいたします。

英語

Thank you for your email.

Please fill in the safety standard for each 20 helmets I purchased from you previously on the excel sheet which I will send you with the information of each helmet by an email for which I was asked by Ministry of Economy of Japan.
I apologize for the inconvenience.

レビュー ( 1 )

nyamababyはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/07/22 02:18:27

元の翻訳
Thank you for your email.

Please fill in the safety standard for each 20 helmets I purchased from you previously on the excel sheet which I will send you with the information of each helmet by an email for which I was asked by Ministry of Economy of Japan.
I apologize for the inconvenience.
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修正後
Thank you for your email.

Please fill in the safety standard for each 20 helmets I purchased from you previously on the excel sheet which I will send you with the information of each helmet by an email for which I was asked by Ministry of Economy of Japan.
I apologize for the inconvenience.

The message was clearly here and the grammar is OK, but there could have been a better phrasing for this. I'm not sure whether I should put it here or not because it's totally going to change everything.