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評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2013/07/01 16:24:22

jpenchtrans
jpenchtrans 52 こんにちは。 英語、中国語を母語としています。大学教育は日本人から受けま...
日本語

ブランディング実績のご紹介

課題:
日本における●●は「カラフル」「ポップ」「オシャレ」というイメージを持たれている。なので10代から20代前半の女性に人気だが大人の女性にも使ってほしいと考えている。クライアントはもっと本質的なメッセージが伝わるクリエイティブを求めて弊社に依頼してきた。
なぜ、そのビジュアルなのか？
クライアントとのヒアリングにおいて本当に伝えたいメッセージはなにか？を導きだした。それは改めて「▲▲」を強く打ち出したいという事。

英語

Introduction of branding performance

Assignment:
In Japan, ● ● has the image of being "colorful", "popular" and "fashionable" . We believe it is very popular among women in the teens and early 20s, yet more mature women also want to use the products. The client has asked us to offer creative ideas to deliver more essential messages.
Why the visual design is preferred?
Upon the hearing with the client, what are the real messages that ought to be delivered? We needed to be guided. The fact is that, we want give a strong compact of "▲▲" once again.

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[削除済みユーザ] 52 こんにちは。 イギリスで生まれ、英語を母語としています。 学校教育は日...
[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/07/04 01:29:27

元の翻訳
Introduction of branding performance

Assignment:
In Japan, ● ● has the image of being "colorful", "popular" and "fashionable" . We believe it is very popular among women in the teens and early 20s, yet more mature women also want to use the products. The client has asked us to offer creative ideas to deliver more essential messages.
Why the visual design is preferred?
Upon the hearing with the client, what are the real messages that ought to be delivered? We needed to be guided. The fact is that, we want give a strong compact of "▲▲" once again.

修正後
Introduction of branding performance

Assignment:
In Japan, ● ● has the image of being "colorful", "popular" and "fashionable" . We believe it is very popular among women in the teens and early 20s, yet more mature women also want to use the products. The client has asked us to offer creative ideas to deliver more essential messages.
Why is the visual design preferred?
Upon the hearing with the client, what are the real messages that ought to be delivered? We needed to be guided. The fact is that, we want to give a strong compact of "▲▲" once again.

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