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評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2013/04/11 15:47:15

emily
emily 50 アルゼンチンと日本のハーフ、Emilyと申します。 ここ２年ほど金融...
日本語

3月27日注文分と4月4日注文分が今日到着しました。

A and B を2つ注文したのにBが付属されていません。
Bを2つ送ってください。

Cを1つ注文したのに同梱されていません。
Cを1つ送ってください。

3月20注文分のDが初期不良です。
pan操作が全く動きません。
tilt操作は動きます。

お客のクレームで返品され
今、動作確認しました。
リモコンの不具合なのか本体の不具合なのか、当方では判断できません。

お客は交換希望なので新しいDを早急に送って欲しい。

Dは御社に返送した方がよいですか？

英語

I have receive the items I placed order on March 27th and April 4th today.

However, I have ordered two A and B, but cannot find the B in the package.
Please send me two B.

I have ordered one C, but cannot find the C in the package.
Please send me one C.

The D I ordered on March 20th is initial failure.
tilt operation works but pan operation dosen't work at all.

There was a claim from a customer and I check the returned item.
I cannot determine whether it is malfunction of the remote control or the body.

Our customer requests to exchange the damaged item, please send us the new D immediately.
Do I need to return the damaged D to you?

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mars16 50 翻訳を始めて、そしてConyacに参加して5年ほどになります（スタンダード...
mars16はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/02/28 21:55:26

元の翻訳
I have receive the items I placed order on March 27th and April 4th today.

However, I have ordered two A and B, but cannot find the B in the package.
Please send me two B.

I have ordered one C, but cannot find the C in the package.
Please send me one C.

The D I ordered on March 20th is initial failure.
tilt operation works but pan operation dosen't work at all.

There was a claim from a customer and I check the returned item.
I cannot determine whether it is malfunction of the remote control or the body.

Our customer requests to exchange the damaged item, please send us the new D immediately.
Do I need to return the damaged D to you?

修正後
Today I received the items I placed orders on March 27th and April 4th.

However, I have ordered two A and B, but cannot find the B in the package.
Please send me two Bs.

I have ordered one C, but cannot find the C in the package.
Please send me a C.

The D I ordered on March 20th has an initial failure.
tilt operation works but pan operation dosen't work at all.

There was a claim from a customer and I check the returned item.
I cannot determine whether it is malfunction of the remote control or the body.

Our customer requests to exchange the damaged item, please send us the new D immediately.
Do I need to return the damaged D to you?

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備考: アルファベットのA、B、C、Dには商品名が入ります。