翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

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日本語

１最果てを見守る人の歌

私は生きてる間にどこまで行けるのか？
行き着いた果てに誰に会うのか。
その次の世界はあるのか？
最果てを見守る人は貴方を待っている。

２青き茨達の夢

青い木々ゆたか生い茂る森の中。
孤高と謳われた人達はどんな夢を見たのか。
美しい女性と結ばれたいとは願ったのか？
彼らの理想を知る事はできない。

３コスモスの心臓

その体は脆く、儚い命であったとしても
生命の輝きは強く美しい。

英語

1. The Song of the Watcher at the Farthest End

How far can I go in this lifetime? Who will I meet at the end of my journey? Does another world await beyond that? The watcher at the farthest end awaits you.

2. Dreams of the Azure Thorns

Within a lush forest of blue trees, What dreams did those renowned souls dream? Did they long to be united with a beautiful woman? Their ideals remain unknown.

3. Heart of the Cosmos

Even if their bodies were fragile, their lives fleeting, The brilliance of life remains strong and beautiful.

レビュー ( 1 )

bluejeans71はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2024/08/17 12:35:38

元の翻訳
1. The Song of the Watcher at the Farthest End

How far can I go in this lifetime? Who will I meet at the end of my journey? Does another world await beyond that? The watcher at the farthest end awaits you.

2. Dreams of the Azure Thorns

Within a lush forest of blue trees, What dreams did those renowned souls dream? Did they long to be united with a beautiful woman? Their ideals remain unknown.

3. Heart of the Cosmos

Even if their bodies were fragile, their lives fleeting, The brilliance of life remains strong and beautiful.

修正後
1. The Song of the Watcher at the Farthest End

How far can I go in this lifetime? Who will I meet at the end of my journey? Does another world await beyond that? The watcher at the farthest end awaits you.

2. Dreams of the Azure Thorns

Within a lush forest of blue trees, what dreams did those renowned souls dream? Did they long to be united with a beautiful woman? Their ideals remain unknown.

3. Heart of the Cosmos

Even if their bodies were fragile, their lives fleeting, The brilliance of life remains strong and beautiful.

[bluejeans71]

修正した箇所は、文頭ではありません。なので
Whatのwを小文字に直しました。