翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

Caiのオーダー内容が決まりましたら、正式にお伝えさせて頂きます。
（おそらく、オーダー内容は、あなたが作ったCaiとそっくりな可愛いCaiを注文します。髪の色もブラウンのストレートモヘアが良いです。）
Caiキットが届いたら教えてください。
１）頭と手足のバランスをあなたに確認してほしいです。（通常のCaiよりも少し大きくしたい。50cm-55cm）
２）キットとグラスアイのバランスを確認したいです。（もし、希望の黒目の大きさでない場合再度手配が必要になるので）

英語

I will contact you officially, once details of Cai’s order has been decided.
(I am assuming, the order details will be a Cai-looking doll just like the Cai you have made. I would love the hair to be brown, straight mohair).
Please let me know when Cai’s kit arrives.
1. I would like you to check the balance of the head and limbs. (I’m hoping for a doll a little taller than Cai. 50cm-55cm).
2. I would like to check the balance of the kit and glass eyes. (This is because, if the iris of the eyes are not the desired size, a rearrangement will be needed).

レビュー ( 1 )

bluejeans71はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2024/03/24 19:28:39

元の翻訳
I will contact you officially, once details of Cai’s order has been decided.
(I am assuming, the order details will be a Cai-looking doll just like the Cai you have made. I would love the hair to be brown, straight mohair).
Please let me know when Cai’s kit arrives.
1. I would like you to check the balance of the head and limbs. (I’m hoping for a doll a little taller than Cai. 50cm-55cm).
2. I would like to check the balance of the kit and glass eyes. (This is because, if the iris of the eyes are not the desired size, a rearrangement will be needed).

修正後
I will contact you officially, once details of Cai’s order have been decided.
(I am assuming, the order details will be a Cai-looking doll just like the Cai you have made. I would love the hair to be brown, straight mohair).
Please let me know when Cai’s kit arrives.
1. I would like you to check the balance of the head and limbs. (I’m hoping for a doll a little taller than Cai. 50cm-55cm).
2. I would like to check the balance of the kit and glass eyes. (This is because, if the iris of the eyes are not the desired size, a rearrangement will be needed).

[yukino_snow]

Thank you for your review bluejeans71:)
I’ll make sure to be more careful with small basic grammar mistakes!