I sent back the broken saxophone to your appointed address late this afternoon. The tracking number is EMSxxx. Please refund $3,658.00 as soon as possible via PayPal. Thanks in advance.
I have sent this broken saxophone to the address you gave me this evening. The tracking number is EMSxxx. Please send me my refund of $3,658.00 by PayPal as soon as possible. Thank you.
I have sent the broken saxophone back to the designated address this afternoon, and the tracking number is EMSxxx. I need you to pay $3,658.00 back to my Paypal account promptly. Thank you.
@shamash Can you please give me a specific feedback so that I can improve? (今後の勉強の為に、具体的なフィードバックをいただけますでしょうか?)