yamikuro3 (yamikuro3) — Written Reviews
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About 12 years ago
横浜市青葉区
Japanese (Native)
English
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rated this translation result as ★★
Japanese → English
29 Jan 2013 at 16:06
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Comment The 3rd sentence was not translated right. There are other errors as well. |
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rated this translation result as ★★
Japanese → English
29 Jan 2013 at 16:13
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Comment There are several grammatical errors, and it does not sound natural in general. |