田之畑 諒(Tanohata Ryo) (tan0ry0) — Received Reviews
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06 Mar 2013 at 17:28
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Comment お疲れさまです。 原文の英語が出鱈目ですから、この翻訳が限界かと思います。 ただ敢えて挙げるならば、果たして "the electronic" ＝ 「電子回路」で本当に良いのか？ それと、"to have a normal sound" ＝ 「直さなければならない... |