Ogasawara Ai (ogasawaraai) — Received Reviews
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Almost 10 years ago
Female
30s
Aichi Prefecture , Toyokawa
Japanese (Native)
English
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rated this translation result as ★★★
English → Japanese
22 Dec 2014 at 15:18
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Comment 「この商品を購入したお客様に届いた商品」→ 「商品」が二重表現になっています。 また、句点で区切るところが読点になっているようです。 |