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Mizuki Shibahara (mzkshi) — Received Reviews

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Almost 10 years ago Male 30s
United States
English (Native) Japanese

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[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
11 Jul 2014 at 11:55

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The glamour which shines from the goddess's shimmering adult straight hair.

The color is dark brown within a grey color which presents a stage for natural black hair.
Use a pearl spray to create a shiny hair style finish.

a relaxed medium length representing a resort-like feeling

Cutting off 10 cm from the layered long style will eliminate the dry feeling.
Just like the Rinka-relaxed-style, mixed curls should be added to move the tips of the hair freely.
The organic hair color should be used and taken advantage of.
The final step is to create volume of the hair by using powder wax, and use hair jel in order to moisten the hair tips and the hair style is completed.

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The glamour which shines from the goddess's shimmering adult straight hair.

The color is dark brown within a grey color which presents a stage for natural black hair.
Use a pearl spray to create a shiny hair style finish.

a relaxed medium length representing a resort-like feeling

Cutting off 10 cm from the layered long style will eliminate the dry feeling.
Just like the Rinka-relaxed style, mixed curls should be added to move the tips of the hair freely.
The organic hair color should be used and taken advantage of.
The final step is to create volume of the hair by using powder wax, and use hair gel in order to moisten the hair tips and the hair style is completed.