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About 12 years ago
Japanese (Native) English

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russ87 rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English
17 Feb 2014 at 15:30

original
The elderly couple who have lived in the neighbor for sixty years moved into a nursing home, and their house and land were sold to a housing manufacturer/marketer company. The house was taken apart right after the couple left, and the land became an empty place. I record here from the house demolition to the completion of the new buildings.

Although it was only five days after the elderly couple left their land, the place where the couple has spent their lives for over sixty years quickly turned into a vacant land. By the arm of the industrial machine, the house was easily crushed, as it was made out of a paper. The fence was placed in the middle of the land. Two residential buildings would be built on the land.

corrected
The elderly couple who had lived in the neighbor for sixty years moved into a nursing home, and their house and land were sold to a housing manufacturer/marketer company. The house was taken apart right after the couple left, and the land became an empty place. I document here the events from the house demolition to the completion of the new buildings.

Although not even a whole week had passed since the elderly couple left their land, the place where the couple had spent their lives for over sixty years quickly was turned into vacant land in a mere 5 days. By the arm of a construction machine, the house was easily crushed, as if it was made out of paper. A fence was placed in the middle of the land. It seems two residential buildings will be built on the land.