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Maki (maki-i) — Received Reviews

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About 4 years ago Female
Japan
Japanese (Native) English
Culture Food/Recipe/Menu Travel Business

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karekora rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
13 May 2020 at 16:06

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①I am interested in purchasing 〇〇〇 at your page on Amazon.com. It would be appreciated if you could offer about 12 USD for this item. In order to purchase it at 12 USD, kindly advise me how many items we should order.
Hopefully our purchasing amount and your preferred price can match, so that we will be able to order officially.

③As it is our first time business with you, if our sales goes well, we would like to order more items to you.
We are interested in purchasing hundreds of items if your items are sold successfully.
Prior to this, would you please advise me your special rates for 10 / 30/ 50 orders each.

corrected
①I am interested in purchasing 〇〇〇 on your Amazon.com page. It would be appreciated if you could sell this for about 12 USD. In order to purchase it at 12 USD, kindly advise me how many items we should order.
Hopefully our purchasing amount and your preferred price can match, so that we will be able to order officially.

③It is our first time doing business with you, so if our sales go well, we would like to order more items from you in the future.
We are interested in purchasing hundreds of your items if your items are sold successfully.
Prior to this, would you please advise me of your special rates for 10 / 30 / 50 orders each.