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臼井　馨子 (kyoko301) — Received Reviews

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Over 3 years ago Female 20s
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jodan_123 rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English
03 Apr 2023 at 09:23

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I purchased two of your items as a gift at the auction on January 3rd.
However, I realized I had bought the wrong products.
I haven't opened the packages nor used them yet.

I’m so sorry to trouble you, but could you please give me a refund?
I’ll ship the goods immediately.
I apologize for the inconvenience. I look forward to your reply.

(もし出来れば、最初の「商品」(item)のところを具体的な名詞(例えば服、電化製品など)に変えると、よりナチュラルで丁寧な文章になると感じました。それ以降の「商品」は、item, goodsなど置き換えて表現した方が英語的で自然です。)

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I purchased two of your items as a gift at the auction on January 3rd.
However, I realized that I had bought the wrong products.
I haven't opened the packages nor used them yet.

I’m so sorry, but could you please give me a refund?
I’ll ship the goods back to you immediately.
I apologize for the inconvenience. I look forward to your reply.

(もし出来れば、最初の「商品」(item)のところを具体的な名詞(例えば服、電化製品など)に変えると、よりナチュラルで丁寧な文章になると感じました。それ以降の「商品」は、item, goodsなど置き換えて表現した方が英語的で自然です。)