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kity — Written Reviews

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Almost 10 years ago
Japan
Japanese (Native) English
technology
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kity rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English
25 Aug 2014 at 14:25
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不良品に対する返信のメールですので、言葉の表現には細心の注意を払う必要があります。特に最後の行の intentionを”意図的に”と表現されておりますが、これですと相手に損害を与えるためにこの物品を取られたという解釈をされる恐れがあります。適切な単語を使うことをお勧めします。
kity rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English
25 Aug 2014 at 14:33
Comment
２行目の文章では、筆者が権利侵害をしていることを認識つつ、行為を行ったものと読み取れます。原文では、非侵害者からの指摘を受けて権利侵害に気づき謝罪しているので、文体そのものを適切なものに見直しては。
kity rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English
25 Aug 2014 at 16:17

original
Thank you for contacting us.
We give the answer for your question sincerely.

Handling to stop delaying arrival of products.

④Ten days after we sent the product, we inform the buyer with checking of the situation of tracing.

We could prevent these problems from informing buyers on a regular basis because main reason why the arrival of product gets delayed is stopped by customs service.

Thank you for your comprehension.

corrected
We would like to appreciate for your contact,
We would like to answer your question sincerely.

Regarding improvment for reduce to deacrease of delay of delivering products.

④We will give the byer about tracking information of deliverying the product after 10days after shipping,↵


We could prevent these problems from informing buyers on a regular basis because main reason why the arrival of product gets delayed is stopped by customs service.

Sincelery yours,