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rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Thai → English 27 Jun 2014 at 21:43
Comment Good work.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Thai → English 27 Jun 2014 at 21:41
original Article 2 : According to article 1, the council have powers and duties from the following. 1. Present policy management plans and measures to maintain the mission of the National Council for Peace and Order. 2. Nationalise and monitor the performance of enterprises. In order to the management of the enterprise is to be effective and cause the topmost effectiveness. 3. Integrated operation of enterprises to unity. 4. Propose guidelines to fix various issues of enterprises consist of management, operations and finance to the National Council for Peace and Order. 5. Promote and encourage private sector to invest in the public enterprises. 6. Appointed a subcommittee and working group to support operations as required.	corrected Article 2 : According to article 1, the council have powers and duties from the following. 1. Present policy management plans and measures to maintain the mission of the National Council for Peace and Order. 2. Nationalise and monitor the performance of enterprises. In order to the management of the enterprise is to be effective and cause the topmost effectiveness. 3. Integrated operation of enterprises to unity. 4. Propose guidelines to fix various issues of enterprises consist of management, operations and finance to the National Council for Peace and Order. 5. Promote and encourage private sector to invest in the public enterprises. 6. Appoint a subcommittee and working group to support operations as required.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Thai → English

27 Jun 2014 at 21:41

original
Article 2 : According to article 1, the council have powers and duties from the following.
1. Present policy management plans and measures to maintain the mission of the National Council for Peace and Order.
2. Nationalise and monitor the performance of enterprises. In order to the management of the enterprise is to be effective and cause the topmost effectiveness.
3. Integrated operation of enterprises to unity.
4. Propose guidelines to fix various issues of enterprises consist of management, operations and finance to the National Council for Peace and Order.
5. Promote and encourage private sector to invest in the public enterprises.
6. Appointed a subcommittee and working group to support operations as required.

corrected
Article 2 : According to article 1, the council have powers and duties from the following.
1. Present policy management plans and measures to maintain the mission of the National Council for Peace and Order.
2. Nationalise and monitor the performance of enterprises. In order to the management of the enterprise is to be effective and cause the topmost effectiveness.
3. Integrated operation of enterprises to unity.
4. Propose guidelines to fix various issues of enterprises consist of management, operations and finance to the National Council for Peace and Order.
5. Promote and encourage private sector to invest in the public enterprises.
6. Appoint a subcommittee and working group to support operations as required.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Thai 06 Mar 2013 at 14:35
Comment Nice translation, still using a bit too official language though IMHO ;-)

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