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hummingchie rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English
21 Feb 2014 at 06:30

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The Chuugoku Region↵
From its highest and most beautiful mountain, the broad vistas of Tottori and Shimane can be viewed.
Unzen (Kyushu and Nagasaki)
Not only the magnificent Unzen, but the prefectures of Saga, Fukuoka, and to the east, the coast of Kumamoto Prefecture are clearly visible.
We can say without fear of contradiction that the variety of scenes on view from carriage windows are iconic of train travel in Kyushu.
Turning our attention further south to Kagoshima, (or “Sakurajima”, meaning “Cherry Blossom Island”, as it is called), where a particular mountain makes its presence felt.
If your journey takes you to Kagoshima, you can experience the sight of the columns of smoke issuing from the Volcano on the far side of Kumgang Bay. ↵

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This is the highest and most beautiful mountain in the Chugoku Region that can be viewed fron the broad vistas of Tottori and Shimane.
Unzen (Kyushu and Nagasaki)
Not only the magnificent Unzen, but the prefectures of Saga, Fukuoka, and to the east, the coast of Kumamoto Prefecture are clearly visible.
We can say without fear of contradiction that the variety of scenes on view from carriage windows are iconic of train travel in Kyushu.
Turning our attention further south to Kagoshima, everyone recalls the “Sakurajima” (meaning “Cherry Blossom Island”, as it is called, and it is a mountain itself), which makes its presence felt.
If your journey takes you to Kagoshima, you can experience the sight of the columns of smoke issuing from the Volcano on the far side of Kinkou Bay.