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Rating: 52 / 1 Review / 30 Jul 2018 at 03:45

a_chihiro
a_chihiro 52 イタリア在住。イタリア人の夫との共通言語は英語（夫はカナダに４年住んでいま...
Japanese

こちらでebayを介さずに直接お取引すれば、ebayに支払う手数料分の値引きができます。
そのためあなたのご希望の価格、$175での販売が可能です。
ebayを通さない取引に同意いただければ、すぐにPayPal経由でインボイスをお送りします。
その場合に一つ条件があります。
「ebayを介さない取引の話を、ebay上（メッセージ欄）では一切しない」という約束をしていただけますか？
Yesであれば、すぐにPayPalから$175のインボイスをあなたへ送ります。

English

If we do transactions directly without using ebay, I can discount the fee you pay for ebay.
Therefore, I can sell you at your desired price, which is $ 175.
If you agree to the transaction that not using ebay, I will send you an invoice via PayPal immediately.
In that case there is one condition I would like to ask.
Could you make a promise that "Do not say anything about transactions without using ebay on the page of ebay (message section)" ?
If you can promise, I will send you an invoice of $ 175 via PayPal immediately .

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yoppo1026 57 プロフィールをご覧いただき、誠にありがとうございます。 日本語ネイティブ...
yoppo1026 rated this translation result as ★★★★★ 31 Jul 2018 at 16:18

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If we do transactions directly without using ebay, I can discount the fee you pay for ebay.
Therefore, I can sell you at your desired price, which is $ 175.
If you agree to the transaction that not using ebay, I will send you an invoice via PayPal immediately.
In that case there is one condition I would like to ask.
Could you make a promise that "Do not say anything about transactions without using ebay on the page of ebay (message section)" ?
If you can promise, I will send you an invoice of $ 175 via PayPal immediately .

corrected
If we do transactions directly without using ebay, I can discount the fee you pay for ebay.
Therefore, I can sell you at your desired price, which is $175.
If you agree to the transaction that not using ebay, I will send you an invoice via PayPal immediately.
In that case there is one condition I would like to ask.
Could you make a promise that "Do not say anything about transactions without using ebay on the page of ebay (message section)" ?
If you can promise, I will send you an invoice of $175 via PayPal immediately .

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Additional info: ebayのセラーです。前半がebay上の取引、後半は直接取引 のためのメッセージです。普通に丁寧な英文でお願い致します。