Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

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Japanese

卸ご担当者様

初めて連絡いたします。
日本でアパレル販売をしております○○と申します。

御社ブランドを卸にて購入させていただきたく
連絡いたしました。

当方は日本国内で△や□をECショップにて
販売しております。

現在上記ECサイトにて年間約×US＄
売上があります。

御社製品は日本のお客様に非常に魅力的で、
取引させていただければ、御社の売上にも貢献できると
確信しております。

取引の条件（量や価格等）がありましたら、
お教えいただけますでしょうか。

ご不明点等ございましたら、
何なりとご連絡ください。

English

To whom it may concern,

I'm contacting you for the first time.
My name is ○○, I sell apparels in Japan.

I contacted you since I'd like to buy your brand items at wholesale price.

I sell △ and □ at EC shops in Japan.

Currently, I sell xUS$ annually on the above EC websites.

Your items are very attractive for Japanese customers, so I'm confident that if I can buy from you I'll be able to contribute to your sales as well.

Please let me know terms and conditions (quantity, price etc.) if there is any.

Please contact me if there is anything that needs to be cleared.

Reviews ( 1 )

jyebaba rated this translation result as ★★★★ 23 Sep 2015 at 05:01

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To whom it may concern,

I'm contacting you for the first time.
My name is ○○, I sell apparels in Japan.

I contacted you since I'd like to buy your brand items at wholesale price.

I sell △ and □ at EC shops in Japan.

Currently, I sell xUS$ annually on the above EC websites.

Your items are very attractive for Japanese customers, so I'm confident that if I can buy from you I'll be able to contribute to your sales as well.

Please let me know terms and conditions (quantity, price etc.) if there is any.

Please contact me if there is anything that needs to be cleared.

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To whom it may concern,

I'm contacting you for the first time.
My name is ○○, and I sell apparel in Japan.

I contacted you because I'd like to buy your brand's items at wholesale price.

I sell △ and □ on e-commerce websites in Japan.

Currently, I sell xUS$ annually on the above e-commerce websites.

Your items are very attractive for Japanese customers, so I'm confident that if I can buy from you, I'll be able to contribute to your sales as well.

Please let me know the terms and conditions (quantity, price etc.) if there are any.

Please contact me if there is anything that needs to be cleared up.

EC website is 和製英語. Also, it is my understanding that an ECショップ is another name for ECサイト.

Overall, good job! :)