Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

余計なお世話かもしれませんがChange Logは購入者以外も閲覧できるようにした方がより売れると思います。

あとデモサイトのAdsenseが表示されません。サイトだけBanされたのかアカウント自体がBanされたのか教えてもらえませんか？

English

It may be noy my business but I think it would be well sold if you set the change log that not only buyers but also the viewers.

And the Adsense of the demo website is not shown.
Can you tell me if the website was banned only, or the account was banned?

Reviews ( 1 )

tani1973 rated this translation result as ★★★ 08 Feb 2015 at 18:52

original
It may be noy my business but I think it would be well sold if you set the change log that not only buyers but also the viewers.

And the Adsense of the demo website is not shown.
Can you tell me if the website was banned only, or the account was banned?

corrected
It may not be my business but I think it would sell well if you set the change log to be viewable to non-buyers as well as buyers.

And the Adsense of the demo website is not shown.
Can you tell me if only the website was banned, or the account was banned?

that not only buyers but also the viewersの部分が文法的誤りがあります。that以下は主語+動詞が入るので動詞が抜けています。