Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

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Japanese

私達が確認をした所、Amazonの説明で数量について間違いがあったようです。
私達は早急に送料と商品代金の返金致します。その数量の違いの商品はお客様に差し上げます。
商品をお届けできなくて大変申し訳ございません。
私達のお店をご利用いただきありがとうございました。

English

After checking in the Amazon explaination, there is a mistake in quantity.
We hope the the postal charge and product will be returned immediately. We give that goods with wrong quantity to customer.
We are deeply sorry for cannot deliver the product.
Thank you for shopping in our shop.

Reviews ( 2 )

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★ 12 Nov 2014 at 09:27

original
After checking in the Amazon explaination, there is a mistake in quantity.
We hope the the postal charge and product will be returned immediately. We give that goods with wrong quantity to customer.
We are deeply sorry for cannot deliver the product.
Thank you for shopping in our shop.

corrected
After checking [dangling modifier] in the Amazon explaination [spelling], [comma splice] there is a mistake in quantity.
We hope the the postal charge and product will be returned [use active voice] immediately. We give that goods with wrong quantity to customer [mistranslation].
We are deeply sorry for [ungrammatical] cannot deliver the product.
Thank you for shopping in our shop.

cielo_translation rated this translation result as ★★★ 12 Nov 2014 at 14:06

original
After checking in the Amazon explaination, there is a mistake in quantity.
We hope the the postal charge and product will be returned immediately. We give that goods with wrong quantity to customer.
We are deeply sorry for cannot deliver the product.
Thank you for shopping in our shop.

corrected
After checking the Amazon explanation, there was a mistake in the quantity.
We will return you the postal charge and product cost immediately. We will give you the goods which the quantity was wrong for free.
We are deeply sorry for not being able to deliver the product.
Thank you for shopping with us.