Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Additional info: 会社の寮から退去する居住者への連絡。

Japanese

貴方の引っ越しの件連絡ありがとう。
遅くとも11月16日までに引っ越すとのこと、分かりました。
出来るだけ早く部屋を空けるようお願いします。
何かあればまたご連絡下さい。

English

Thank you for your mail.
As you said, you will move out no later than Nov 16. I would appreciate if the house can be emptied sooner.
Should you have any queries, please feel free to contact me.

Reviews ( 1 )

tearz rated this translation result as ★★★★ 24 Oct 2014 at 16:47

original
Thank you for your mail.
As you said, you will move out no later than Nov 16. I would appreciate if the house can be emptied sooner.
Should you have any queries, please feel free to contact me.

corrected
Thank you for your e-mail.
As you said, you will move out no later than Nov 16. I would appreciate if the house can be emptied sooner.
Should you have any queries, please feel free to contact me.

「部屋を空ける」→　「部屋を空にして次の人がすぐに入居できるようにする」と解釈すると更に良い英訳になりそうです。