Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

初めまして。

株式会社xxxxのyyyyと申します。
今後から発注業務の担当をさせていただくことになりました。よろしくお願いします。

以下注文です。ご確認下さい。


"必ずご確認下さい"
インボイスに記載する商品価格は、正確な金額を記載するようにお願いします。

English

How do you do?

I am yyy at xxxx Corporation.
I am going to be in charge of shpping from now.
I hope that we can be cooperative.

The following is an order. I ask you to check it.

"Please do not fail to check."
We ask you that you list the correct price for the price of the items in the invoice.

Reviews ( 1 )

acdcasic rated this translation result as ★★ 08 Oct 2014 at 17:59

original
How do you do?

I am yyy at xxxx Corporation.↵
I am going to be in charge of shpping from now.↵
I hope that we can be cooperative.

The following is an order. I ask you to check it.

"Please do not fail to check."↵
We ask you that you list the correct price for the price of the items in the invoice.↵
↵

corrected
Dear (宛名),

I am yyy from xxxx Corporation. I am going to be in charge of purchase order from now on. Thank you for your cooperation in advance.

Here is the purchase order. Can you please check it?

*Important*↵
Please make sure to put correct prices on the invoice.

ビジネスメールでHow do you doは見たことがありません。
A社のBですはatでなくfromです。
発注はpurchase orderです。
ask you to check というのはほとんど命令です。