Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Rating: 52 / 1 Review / 05 Oct 2014 at 09:02

ksconyac
ksconyac 52 2014年よりConyac参加。アメリカ在住11年になります。 職業は自...
Japanese

A
"家族か突然いなくなっちゃうのってどんな気持ちなんだろうね。死んだとことかさ確認できなかったらあきらめらんないかな やっぱ。"
"確認しても そんなに簡単に割り切れないんじゃない?"
"多分 子供だと特にね。"
B
うっかり忘れていかれたようでの。
C
今回 実はこのフリートークのスペースがとても多いです。うーむ こまった...
というわけで 1/3スペースに 4コマを2つと あらすじスペースには
相変わらずの だらだらとした 趣味の話を書いてます。

English

A
“I’m wondering how is the feeling of family being disappeared all of sudden. It will be hard to give up, especially if they are missing and you can’t confirm their death”
“Even if you could confirm their death, don’t you think it would still be hard to accept the fact?”
“Probably so, especially if they were kids.”

B
It seems like you carelessly forgot.

C
In fact, this time, we have lots of spaces for this free conversation. This bothers me…
Therefore, in one third of the space, I will write two Yonkoma Mangas (4-panel comics), and trivial hobby talks in the outline space as usual.

Reviews ( 1 )

ilad 52 公文書(英日)、企業内部文書、社内マニュアル(英⇔日)、正規の翻訳会社から...
ilad rated this translation result as ★★★★ 06 Oct 2014 at 13:23

original
A
“I’m wondering how is the feeling of family being disappeared all of sudden. It will be hard to give up, especially if they are missing and you can’t confirm their death”
“Even if you could confirm their death, don’t you think it would still be hard to accept the fact?”
“Probably so, especially if they were kids.”

B
It seems like you carelessly forgot.

C
In fact, this time, we have lots of spaces for this free conversation. This bothers me…
Therefore, in one third of the space, I will write two Yonkoma Mangas (4-panel comics), and trivial hobby talks in the outline space as usual.

corrected
A
“I’m wondering how you would feel when your family have disappeared all of a sudden. It would be hard to give up, especially if they are missing and you can’t confirm their death”
“Even if you could confirm their death, don’t you think it would still be hard to accept the fact?”
“Probably so, especially if they were kids.”

B
It seems like you carelessly forgot.

C
In fact, this time, we have lots of spaces for this free conversation. This bothers me…
Therefore, in one third of the space, I will write two Yonkoma Mangas (4-panel comics), and trivial hobby talks in the outline space as usual.

You = 一般

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