Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

私は注文した商品Ａが欲しいです。
商品Ａと間違えて商品Ｂを送らないように注意してください。
もしもあなたが商品Ａの在庫を持っていない場合は、この注文をキャンセルします。
私はあなたが商品Ａを送ってくれることを期待しています。
宜しくお願い致します。

English

I need A that I ordered.
Please be careful that you do not send B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have an inventory of A, I cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

Reviews ( 2 )

chee_madam rated this translation result as ★★★★ 04 Sep 2014 at 10:48

original
I need A that I ordered.
Please be careful that you do not send B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have an inventory of A, I cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

corrected
I need A that I ordered.
Please be careful that you do not send B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have A in stock, I would like to cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

tearz rated this translation result as ★★★ 04 Sep 2014 at 11:06

original
I need A that I ordered.
Please be careful that you do not send B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have an inventory of A, I cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

corrected
I want A that I ordered.
Please be sure not to ship B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have the inventory of A, I will cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

need とwantの違いを意識なさってみるとよろしいかと思います。

[sujiko]

ご指摘ありがとうございます。