Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Rating: 52 / 1 Review / 03 Sep 2014 at 09:22

spdr
spdr 52
Japanese

私は注文した商品Aが欲しいです。
商品Aと間違えて商品Bを送らないように注意してください。
もしもあなたが商品Aの在庫を持っていない場合は、この注文をキャンセルします。
私はあなたが商品Aを送ってくれることを期待しています。
宜しくお願い致します。

English

I would like to have the item A I ordered.
Make sure for not to ship the item B mistakenly in place of item A.
If you don't have the item A in your inventory, I will cancel this order.
I really expect that you would send me the item A.
Thank you for your understanding.

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chee_madam 52 留学、就労と英語圏で15年生活してまいりました。実務翻訳に従事しています。...
chee_madam rated this translation result as ★★★★ 04 Sep 2014 at 10:50

original
I would like to have the item A I ordered.
Make sure for not to ship the item B mistakenly in place of item A.
If you don't have the item A in your inventory, I will cancel this order.
I really expect that you would send me the item A.
Thank you for your understanding.

corrected
I would like to have the item A that I ordered.
Make sure not to ship the item B in place of item A by mistake.
If you don't have the item A in your stock, I will cancel this order.
I really expect that you would ship me the item A.
Thank you for your understanding.

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