Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

商品を受け取りました。
商品を確認したところ、人形が持っている天秤が付属していませんでした。
早急に天秤を送っていただけないでしょうか？
宜しくお願い致します。

English

I have received the goods.
When I was checking them I realized that the doll was missing its balance.
Can I ask you to send the balance as soon as possible please?
Thank you.

Reviews ( 2 )

tearz rated this translation result as ★★★★ 11 Aug 2014 at 14:13

Canよりcouldの表現のほうがいいかなと思います。

chee_madam rated this translation result as ★★★ 11 Aug 2014 at 19:00

original
I have received the goods.
When I was checking them I realized that the doll was missing its balance.
Can I ask you to send the balance as soon as possible please?
Thank you.

corrected
I have received the goods.
When I was checking them I realized that the scale (balance) which the doll is supposed to hold was not enclosed in the package.
Can I ask you to send the balance as soon as possible please?
Thank you.

the doll was missing its balance. sounds a bit strange as the original text is 人形が持っている天秤が付属していませんでした。

[ozsamurai_69]

I interpreted it as a weight balance, perhaps to hold the doll upright, could go either way!

[chee_madam]

Hold on, I've got too much going on right now. get back to you later