Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Rating: 52 / 2 Reviews / 03 Aug 2014 at 21:36

shouryou
shouryou 52 Hello, I am a native English and Chin...
Japanese

Facebookの投稿を見ました。
ひとつ提案なのですが、もし日本での代理店契約をいただけるのなら、私は10000ドルほどの注文をして、代金を先にあなたへ入金しましょうか?

English

I had read the post on Facebook
I have a proposal, if you are receiving the contract for the agency in Japan, I would wish to order 10000 dollars.
Should I send the amount over to you first?

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dazaifukid 53 来日13年目。東京在住。文系大学卒→理系大学院中退。翻訳・通訳歴10年。ビ...
dazaifukid rated this translation result as 04 Aug 2014 at 21:53

original
I had read the post on Facebook
I have a proposal, if you are receiving the contract for the agency in Japan, I would wish to order 10000 dollars.
Should I send the amount over to you first?

corrected
I saw your post on Facebook.
I have a proposal, if I can get distributor agreement in Japan, I would like to place an order of about 10,000 dollars. Shall I send the payment to you first?.

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hidessy 52 当プロフィールをご覧いただき、ありがとうございます。 主に英語→日本...
hidessy rated this translation result as ★★ 04 Aug 2014 at 23:44

original
I had read the post on Facebook
I have a proposal, if you are receiving the contract for the agency in Japan, I would wish to order 10000 dollars.
Should I send the amount over to you first?

corrected
I have read the post on Facebook
I have a proposal. If I obtain a distributor agreement with you in Japan, shall I order of around 10000 dollars, and make a payment to you first?

より自然な表現に修正しました。

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Additional info: 代理店は、distributorでお願いします。