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Rating: 60 / Native English / 1 Review / 11 Jun 2014 at 19:06
3点の商品を注文いたします。入荷しましたら送っていただけますでしょうか?PayPalを通じて代金を支払うので送料を含めたインボイスを送ってください。ご連絡をお待ちしております。
I have ordered 3 items. When the arrive in can you please send them? I will be paying by PayPal, could you please send me a payment request including the postage cost. I await your reply
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I have ordered 3 items. When the arrive in can you please send them? I will be paying by PayPal, could you please send me a payment request including the postage cost. I await your reply
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I'll order 3 items. When it's arrived, can you please send them? I will be paying by PayPal, could you please send me a payment request including the shipping cost. I'm awaiting your reply.
注文いたします。なので、will order,またawaitやarriveの使い方がおかしいと思います。