Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

#abit

ご返信ありがとうございます。
TMのツアー担当者の方が仰っているのであれば、これ以上の答えはないと思います。
その回答を聞いて安心致しました。それでは、Version3 400ccとして取扱させていただきます。
お手数をおかけして申し訳ありませんが、昨日支払い済の追跡番号をお待ちしております。
何度も申し訳ありません。あなたの商品の到着後に、他商品と合わせて日本に発送したいと
考えているためです。

English

#abit

Thanks for your reply.
If the person in charge of TM tour says that, it would be the best answer. I was relieved to hear that. I will process it as Version 3 400cc.
Sorry for bothering you, but I am waiting for the tracking number for the goods that I paid yesterday. Apology for asking you again, but please understand that I would like to send other goods together with yours right after arrival.

Reviews ( 1 )

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★★ 10 Jun 2014 at 22:28

original
#abit

Thanks for your reply.
If the person in charge of TM tour says that, it would be the best answer. I was relieved to hear that. I will process it as Version 3 400cc.
Sorry for bothering you, but I am waiting for the tracking number for the goods that I paid yesterday. Apology for asking you again, but please understand that I would like to send other goods together with yours right after arrival.

corrected
#abit

Thanks for your reply.
If the person in charge of TM tour says that, it would be the best answer. I was relieved to hear that. I will process it as Version 3 400cc.
I'm sorry for the delay, but I am waiting for the tracking number for the goods that was paid yesterday. Once again I apologize, but please understand that I would like to send other goods together with yours right after arrival.

NIce job, needs some editing.

[acdcasic]

Hi, thanks for your positive review. Just wanted to confirm why you chose the word "delay" for the original words "お手数をおかけして". Other than that, your suggestion is very helpful. Thank you!

[[deleted user]]

I thought it sounded more natural than "sorry for bothering you" since there is going to be a wait for the tracking numbers.

[acdcasic]

Got it, thanks :-)