Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )
Rating: 52 / 2 Reviews / 08 May 2014 at 12:12
あなたから購入した商品がまだ届きません。
発送日の4月9日から4週間経過しましたが、商品の到着はいつ頃になりますか?
すぐにご返信下さい。
The commodity which I parchased from you didn't arrive at me.
4 weeks have passed since the shipping date,April 9th. When will be arrival of commodity?
Please reply for me right now.
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original
The commodity which I parchased from you didn't arrive at me.
4 weeks have passed since the shipping date,April 9th. When will be arrival of commodity?
Please reply for me right now.
corrected
The commodity I parchased [spelling] from you didn't [tense confusion] arrive at me [awkward].
4 weeks have passed since the shipping date, April 9th. When will be the arrival of the commodity [awkward]?
Please reply to me right now.
original
The commodity which I parchased from you didn't arrive at me.
4 weeks have passed since the shipping date,April 9th. When will be arrival of commodity?
Please reply for me right now.
corrected
The commodity which I purchased from you didn't arrive at me.
4 weeks have passed since the shipping date,April 9th. When will be arrival of commodity? (When will the item arrive?もしくはWhen will I receive the item、もしくはWhen will be the arrival date of the item?となると思います。Commodityでも厳密には間違いではないとは思いますが、ItemとかMy orderのようなもののほうが一般的かなと思います。)
Please give me your response as soon as possible.