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Rating: 51 / 1 Review / 24 Apr 2014 at 20:51

[deleted user]
[deleted user] 51
Japanese

ライターは発送します。
一部分解して送りますので予めご了承下さい。

■カメラ届きました。

何度も連絡してくれてありがとう。
カメラはどうしますか?
あなたは3Dカメラが必要ですか?
もしよければ他のカメラを探すこともできます.

返金をもう行ってもいいですか?

English

I will ship the lighter.
Some parts will be decomposed. I appreciate your understanding.

■The camara has arrived here.

Thank you for your prompt replays.
Would you like the camera?
Do you need a 3D camera?
I can look for another camara if you would like.

Could I start the process of the refund?

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chee_madam 52 留学、就労と英語圏で15年生活してまいりました。実務翻訳に従事しています。...
chee_madam rated this translation result as ★★★ 24 Apr 2014 at 22:52

original
I will ship the lighter.
Some parts will be decomposed. I appreciate your understanding.

■The camara has arrived here.

Thank you for your prompt replays.
Would you like the camera?
Do you need a 3D camera?
I can look for another camara if you would like.

Could I start the process of the refund?

corrected
I will ship the lighter.
Please note that I will be taking some of the parts apart.

■The camera has arrived here.

Thank you for sending me so many messages
What would you like to do with the camera?
Do you need a 3D camera?
I can look for another camera if you would like.

Could I start processing for the refund now?

タイプミスが多すぎるように見受けられました。また、decomposeを分解の訳として使われていますが、このように機械類を分解するという場合にはめったに使われないのではないかと思います。どちらかというと、有機物が腐敗して「分解」されていくというような状況に使われると思います。。

[deleted user] [deleted user] 24 Apr 2014 at 23:03

ご指摘ありがとうございます。気を付けます。

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