Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Additional info: アルファベットのA、Bには商品名が入ります。

Japanese

御社製品の在庫状況について質問があります。
私が受け取っている最新のPrice Listを添付しました。

このPrice Listに掲載されている中に、すでに販売が終了した商品ありますか？
逆に掲載されていないのに、販売している商品はありますか？

Aは半年前に販売が中止されたと連絡をもらいました。
しかし、未だに掲載されています。
3色とも購入可能な状況ですか？

Bは販売が終了したのですか？

最新で正確なPrice Listが欲しいです。


昨日から発送依頼ができなくてとても困っています。

English

Would you mind if ask some questions about stock state of your company?
I attached latest Price List that I've received already.
Are there any product that Sale completed ?
Or Are there any product that isn't on My Price List ?
I　was noticed that Product A has stopped sale half a year ago, but Product A is still in My Price List.
Can I buy all three color product now ?
Product B has stopped sale now ?
I want to get collect and latest Price List immediately .
I have a trouble with my task of shipping order.

Reviews ( 1 )

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★ 12 Apr 2014 at 14:18

original
Would you mind if ask some questions about stock state of your company?
I attached latest Price List that I've received already.
Are there any product that Sale completed ?
Or Are there any product that isn't on My Price List ?
I　was noticed that Product A has stopped sale half a year ago, but Product A is still in My Price List.
Can I buy all three color product now ?
Product B has stopped sale now ?
I want to get collect and latest Price List immediately .
I have a trouble with my task of shipping order.

corrected
Would you mind if I asked some questions about your company's inventory state?
I have attached the latest price list that I have received.
Are there any product on the list that are sold out?
Or are there any products [plural] that isn't [singular] on My Price List [?] ?
I was noticed [wrong usage] that Product A has stopped [tense confusion] sale half a year ago, but Product A is still on My Price List [lowercased].
Can I buy all three colors now ?
Product B has stopped sale [wrong usage] now ?
I want to get [article] collect [parts of speech confusion] and latest Price List immediately.
I have a trouble [wrong usage] with my task of shipping order.