Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

(1)
わかりました。
私はこの商品がどうしても欲しいので、商品の再送をお願いします。（出来ればトラッキングナンバーをつけてください）
商品の再送が完了したら、メッセージを送ってください。
敬具

(2)
今回は返金でお願いします。

English

(1)
I understand.
I really need this item and would like you to send it again. (Could you provide a tracking number?)
Please let me know when the item is on its way. Thank you.
Sincerely.

(2)
I would like a refund this time.

Reviews ( 1 )

a_shimoda rated this translation result as ★★★★ 14 Mar 2014 at 20:44

original
(1)
I understand.
I really need this item and would like you to send it again. (Could you provide a tracking number?)
Please let me know when the item is on its way. Thank you.
Sincerely.

(2)
I would like a refund this time.

corrected
(1)
I understand.
I really need this item and would like you to send it again. (If possible, could you provide a tracking number?)
Please let me know when the item is on its way. Thank you.
Sincerely.

(2)
I would like a refund this time.

とても自然で良いと思いましたが、あえて「できたら」のところを付け加えさせていただきました。

[ziggy]

レビューをありがとうございました。