Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Rating: 52 / 1 Review / 21 Jan 2014 at 21:29

Japanese

ly61201

せっかく世界でも有数の近代都市、東京へ来たのなら、東京の街を一望してみたくありませんか?

そうであれば、東京タワーに登ろう!

と思いがち…。ですが、ちょっと待って下さい。そんなことすれば、あなたが今から見ようとしている景色の中に、東京のシンボルであるその東京タワーが含まれません。

「東京タワーも一緒に見たい…。(;_;)」ですよね??
それに…


English

When you come to Tokyo, one of the most modernized metropolises, don’t you want to observe the whole landscape of Tokyo?
If so, let’s climb up the Tokyo Tower!

…you might think that. But, wait a minute. If you do so, The Tokyo Tower, the symbol of Tokyo cannot be included of the scenery you are going to observe.

“I want to see the landscape with the Tokyo Tower…(;_;)” don’t you?
Moreover…

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[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★★ 03 Feb 2014 at 12:44

original
When you come to Tokyo, one of the most modernized metropolises, don’t you want to observe the whole landscape of Tokyo?
If so, let’s climb up the Tokyo Tower!

…you might think that. But, wait a minute. If you do so, The Tokyo Tower, the symbol of Tokyo cannot be included of the scenery you are going to observe.

“I want to see the landscape with the Tokyo Tower…(;_;)” don’t you?
Moreover…

corrected
When you come to Tokyo, one of the most modernized metropolises, don’t you want to observe its whole landscape?
If so, let’s climb up Tokyo Tower!

…you might think that. But wait a minute. If you do so, Tokyo Tower, the symbol of Tokyo, cannot be included in the scenery you are going to observe.

“I want to see the landscape with Tokyo Tower…(;_;)” Don’t you?
Moreover…

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