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Rating: 50 / 1 Review / 11 Dec 2013 at 05:08

Japanese

はじめまして、出品の商品に大変興味がありますので、今回、入札をさせていただきます。よろしくお願いいたします。

English

Nice to meet you.
I have a strong interest in a displayed item, so I would like to give you this offer.
Best regards,

Reviews ( 1 )

russ87 68
russ87 rated this translation result as ★★★ 11 Dec 2013 at 12:13

original
Nice to meet you.
I have a strong interest in a displayed item, so I would like to give you this offer.
Best regards,

corrected
Nice to meet you.
I have a strong interest in your displayed item, so I would like to bid for it.
Best regards,

Good translation. 'Give an offer' is not correct in this because it sounds like giving for nothing in return. 'make an offer' is acceptable but I felt 'bid' is more natural

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