Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Rating: 63 / 1 Review / 29 Nov 2013 at 16:05

paulboland
paulboland 63 My goal is to work as a translator in...
Japanese

私はあなたに迷惑をかけてごめんなさい。
初めにあなたが購入してくれたカメラについて、私はあなたに返金をしたいです。しかし、私はあなたに返品を望みます。
関税の手数料がかかったようですが、返品することであなたにその手数料の還付はありませんか?
あなたが沢山の関税を払わざるを得なかったことは私は残念に思います。しかし私も、あなたに返品してもらわなければ、とても大きな損失になります。

English

Sorry for causing you trouble.
First, about the camera you purchased from me, I want to refund your money. However, I am expecting a return of my goods.
It seems there were some handling fees for customs, but do you not get a refund when returning the item? I'm really sorry that you had to pay so many customs fees but if I don't get my goods back then I'll be taking a big loss too.

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aspenx 53 プロフィールをご覧いただき、感謝申し上げます。 工学出身でありながら...
aspenx rated this translation result as ★★★★ 03 Dec 2013 at 12:13

original
Sorry for causing you trouble.
First, about the camera you purchased from me, I want to refund your money. However, I am expecting a return of my goods.
It seems there were some handling fees for customs, but do you not get a refund when returning the item? I'm really sorry that you had to pay so many customs fees but if I don't get my goods back then I'll be taking a big loss too.

corrected
I apologise for inconveniencing you.
First, about the camera you purchased from me, I want to refund your money. However, I am expecting a return of my goods.
It seems there were some handling fees for customs, but do you not get a refund when returning the item? I'm really sorry that you had to pay so many customs fees but if I don't get my goods back then I'll be taking a big loss too.

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Additional info: 相手様が怒っています。誠実かつ毅然とした対応をしたいと思っていますので、そのようなニュアンスの翻訳をお願いします。