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Rating: 50 / Native Japanese / 1 Review / 26 Nov 2013 at 19:56

tani1973
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Japanese


11月11日に購入した商品を、本日、私は受け取りましたが、
私が購入した内容とは異なるものでした。

1)
私が購入した商品は、

Black:3
Pink:3
Red:5
White:2
Rose Pink:2


2)
本日、私が受け取った商品は、

Black:2
Pink:2
Red:3
White:2
Rose Pink:2
Blue:1



3)
私は11月19日にあらたに商品を購入しています。

Light Pink:2
Blue:2


English

I have received the items I purchased on November 11th, but those items were not what I ordered.
1)
The items that I purchased were as follows.

Black:3
Pink:3
Red:5
White:2
Rose Pink:2


2)
The items that I received today were as follows:

Black:2
Pink:2
Red:3
White:2
Rose Pink:2
Blue:1



3)
I have additionally ordered items on November 19th as follows..

Light Pink:2
Blue:2




Reviews ( 1 )

glenwp 53 Hi there everyone. My name is Glen an...
glenwp rated this translation result as ★★★★ 26 Nov 2013 at 22:39

original
I have received the items I purchased on November 11th, but those items were not what I ordered.
1)
The items that I purchased were as follows.

Black:3
Pink:3
Red:5
White:2
Rose Pink:2


2)
The items that I received today were as follows:

Black:2
Pink:2
Red:3
White:2
Rose Pink:2
Blue:1



3)
I have additionally ordered items on November 19th as follows..

Light Pink:2
Blue:2




corrected
I have received the items I purchased on November 11th, but those items were different from what I had ordered.
1)
The items that I purchased are as follows.

Black:3
Pink:3
Red:5
White:2
Rose Pink:2


2)
The items that I received today are as follows:

Black:2
Pink:2
Red:3
White:2
Rose Pink:2
Blue:1



3)
I have additionally ordered items on November 19th as follows..

Light Pink:2
Blue:2




Would it be better to phrase the first line this way? Nonetheless, good translation!

tani1973 tani1973 27 Nov 2013 at 00:02

Thank you for correction, Glen. I appreciate it.

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