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Rating: 50 / 1 Review / 22 Nov 2013 at 16:06
前ページを踏まえると、リーチ率の向上にはEdge Rankを向上させる必要があり、Edge Rankを向上させるためには、各ユーザーとのエンゲージメント、つまりPost Active Rate を向上させる必要があります
If we take the previous page in to account, to improve the reach ratio, the Edge Rank must be improved. To improve the Edge Rank, engagement with each user, in other words, improving of Post Active Rate is needed.
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If we take the previous page in to account, to improve the reach ratio, the Edge Rank must be improved. To improve the Edge Rank, engagement with each user, in other words, improving of Post Active Rate is needed.
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If we take the previous page into account, to improve the reach ratio the Edge Rank must be improved. To do this, engagement with each user, in other words, improving the Post Active Rate, is needed.
Basically fine, just tightened it up a bit