Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

この度はご迷惑をおかけして申し訳ございませんでした。

私のご対応としてましては、修理代金95ドル分をご返金
させていただきたく思いますが、よろしいでしょうか？
よろしければ、すぐに返金処理をいたします。
お手数をおかけいたしますが、何卒よろしくお願いいたします。

English

Sorry for the inconvenience.

I will refund you the repair price of $ 95, OK?
If it is sounds good, we will refund you immediately.
We apologize for any trouble, thank you kindly.

Reviews ( 1 )

mlinah_91 rated this translation result as ★★★★ 25 Oct 2013 at 22:11

original
Sorry for the inconvenience.

I will refund you the repair price of $ 95, OK?
If it is sounds good, we will refund you immediately.
We apologize for any trouble, thank you kindly.

corrected
Sorry for the inconvenience.

I will refund you the repair price of $ 95, is it alright with you?
If it sounds good, we will refund you immediately.
We apologize for any trouble, thank you kindly.

Overall, a good translation but you can use much more formal phrases or words, since in the original Japanese context, the words used are very formal.

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thank you for your review