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Rating: 50 / 1 Review / 24 Oct 2013 at 11:23

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Japanese

世界で最初のデジタルレンジファインダーカメラ、R-D1。その特別なカメラできりとったあなたの特別な日々を、美しいギャラリーに残しましょう。

English

The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Your special days with a special camera will leave behind a beautiful gallery.

Reviews ( 1 )

newbie_translator rated this translation result as ★★ 24 Oct 2013 at 23:08

original
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Your special days with a special camera will leave behind a beautiful gallery.

corrected
The world's first digital range finder camera, R-D1. Let's save the different special days taken with a special camera in a beautiful gallery.

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psychonyaku psychonyaku 25 Oct 2013 at 08:30

"the different special days" leaves something to be desired. Since this is obviously a marketing catchphrase, I think we can play around with the words a little more.

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Additional info: 写真投稿サイト（http://r-d1.com）の説明文です。googleでヒットしたときなどに表示されます。