Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

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English

Thank you very much for accepting our offer.
We will send merchandise (A) along with a $10 gift card as we offered.
We will notify you upon shipping out the merchandise. We are looking forward to continued business relationship with you.

Since there is no reply regarding our offer from you, (We understand you are not satisfied with our offer, so that) we will cancel this order. We are very sorry to put you to the trouble.

Reviews ( 1 )

katrina_z rated this translation result as ★★★★ 14 Oct 2013 at 00:08

original
Thank you very much for accepting our offer.
We will send merchandise (A) along with a $10 gift card as we offered.
We will notify you upon shipping out the merchandise. We are looking forward to continued business relationship with you.

Since there is no reply regarding our offer from you, (We understand you are not satisfied with our offer, so that) we will cancel this order. We are very sorry to put you to the trouble.

corrected
Thank you very much for accepting our offer.
We will send merchandise (A) along with a $10 gift card as we offered.
We will notify you upon shipping out the merchandise. We are looking forward to a continued business relationship with you.

Since there is no reply regarding our offer from you, (We understand you are not satisfied with our offer) we will cancel this order. We are very sorry to have caused you any trouble.

[kazma]

katrina_z san
Thank you for your review.
I didn't recall a phrase of "to have caused you any trouble".
It became much more natural by this.
Thanks, again.
kazma