Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Additional info: 日本のアニメのキャラクターの紹介文です

Japanese

Chihaya Kisaragiは「孤高の歌姫」です。

彼女はアイドル、というよりも歌手を目指している女の子です。

ストイックで真面目な性格で、16歳という年齢なのにとても大人びています。

歌唱力も高く、彼女はアニメの中で、アメリカにレコーディングに向かうなど、のちに世界からとても良い評価を得る才能を持っています。

そんな彼女は、最初は表情も暗く、歌う事だけに専念するあまり、アイドルとしては魅力的ではありません。

English

Chihaya Kisaragi is an “isolated diva”.
She is an girl aspiring to becoming a singer rather than an idol singer.
She is self-disciplined and earnest, and she looks like a grownup although she is only 16 years old.
In the anime, she is a talented singer and goes to the United States for her recording, and she will have a reputation in the world in future.
She is not actually attractive as an idol singer since she has dark expression on her face and is dedicating herself only to sing in the beginning.

Reviews ( 1 )

davis_teruo911 rated this translation result as ★★★★ 21 May 2013 at 11:14

"an girl"→"a girl"
the word "good" should come before "reputation"
"throughout the world" or "worldwide" sounds more natural than "in the world"
"the" should come before "future"

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