Translator Reviews ( Japanese → Native English )

Japanese

こんにちわ。
以前あなたから「商品」を購入した者です。
PayPalメールアドレスは、
[e-mail]
です。
今回はまたあなたの商品を買いたいと思い、連絡しました。
直接取引きしたいので、以前より安い価格での交渉は可能でしょうか？
ちなみに商品は３０個買うつもりです。
他の方とも取引きしているので、なるべく早く連絡頂けたらと思います。
いい返事お待ちしております。
よろしくお願いいたします。

English

Hi. I previously purchased 「product」 from you and my email at PayPal is [e-mail].

I am contacting you this time as I would like to buy your product again. As I would like to deal directly with you, would it be possible to negotiate for a price cheaper than before? By the way, I am intending to purchase 30.

I would appreciate if you could give a reply as soon as possible as I am in contact with others as well.

I await your favourable reply.

Thank you.

Reviews ( 1 )

[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★★ 18 Apr 2013 at 11:32

This sounds a little awkward at places (e.g., "I am intending to ... ") but otherwise good.

[elissavet]

Thank you for your review @casie. I must admit that is a facepalm-mistake. See you around! Thanks again.