Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Japanese

大変残念なお知らせがあります。
今回購入した商品が著作権の問題で日本で販売出来なくなってしまいました。大変申し訳ないのですが今回購入した商品10点をキャンセルして、返金していただけないでしょうか？
今後日本で販売が可能になった際には改めてご連絡させていただきます。
この度は大変なご迷惑とお手数をお掛けして申し訳ございません。ご対応よろしくお願い致します。

English

I am afraid that there is some rather unfortunate news I must relay.
This time, due to copyright issues, the purchased item can no longer be sold in Japan. I am deeply sorry for this, but would it be at all possible to cancel the purchase of the ten goods and receive a return of the payment?
I would certainly be happy to contact you again should the sale of these items become possible again in Japan.
It is inexcusable for me to have caused such a bother and amount of trouble over this and I am truly sorry. I will patiently await your further correspondence.

Reviews ( 2 )

noppy rated this translation result as ★★★★★ 13 Apr 2013 at 17:14

Excellent!

takapitan rated this translation result as ★★★ 13 Apr 2013 at 19:47

For me, a bit lengthy and too literal. Some Japanese words doesn't really mean much as it seems. Ex. "申し訳ございません" doesn't necessarily mean "inexcusable".