Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )
Rating: 72 / 1 Review / 02 Mar 2013 at 05:59
[deleted user]
72
Japanese
こんにちは。
ペイパルで支払おうとするとエラーになります。
ペイパルで決済が出来るように設定してください。
宜しくお願い致します。
English
Hello.
There was an error when I tried to pay by PayPal.
Please set it so that I can make the payment by PayPal.
Thank you in advance.
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[deleted user]
52
こんにちは。
イギリスで生まれ、英語を母語としています。
学校教育は日...
[deleted user] rated this translation result as ★★★
03 Mar 2013 at 10:29
NOT BAD.
ADVICE) Why don't you try to use conjunctions more?
I'm not certain what you mean by conjunctions here - are you suggesting that I connect the sentences? e.g., "There was an error when I tried to pay by PayPal, so please set it so that I can make the payment by PayPal."
Oh I am so sorry I was confused with another's translation.
I will try changing it.