Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Additional info: 日本のゲームのキャラクターの紹介文です

Japanese

Izayoi SakuyaはTouhou Koumakyou the Embodiment of Scarlet Devilに出てくるボスキャラクターであり、シリーズによっては主人公キャラクターです。
彼女は人間であり、紅魔館に住んでいます。

紅魔館のメイド長であり、レミリアの従者。
主であるレミリアには忠誠を誓い、彼女の命令にはしっかりと従う。
普段はメイドとして他の妖精メイドの分までしっかりと働き、仕事も完璧そのものである。

English

Izayoi Sakuya is a boss character that appears in Touhou Koumakyou the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil and the series's protagonist.
She is human and lives in Scarlet Devil Mansion.

She is the head maid of Scarlet Devil Mansion and Remilia's follower.
She swears her allegiance to her mistress Remilia y follows her orders with no fail.
Usually, she works as a maid and works for other fairy maids, and her job is perfect.

Reviews ( 1 )

etardiff rated this translation result as ★★★ 24 Jan 2013 at 19:34

You have a couple of typos/unnatural word choices ("y" for "and", "with no fail" instead of "without fail"), and "works for other fairy maids" is incorrect - the nuance should be that she does their share of the work in addition to her own, not that she is employed by them.