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Rating: 56 / Native Indonesian / 1 Review / 17 Jan 2013 at 12:28

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English

"Love Academy"

New Otome Game "Love Academy"!

Hi there, beautiful princess. Are you ready yet?

Outstanding and talented students from around the world have
gathered together at Moulin Academy High School, a private
institution. Why was this ordinary girl attending the academy?

Beneath the fireworks at a masquerade party, an unexpected romantic
encounter takes place.

All of this is followed by a sudden and sweet proposal
under blossoming cherry trees!

She had lunch on the rooftop together with the charming boy.

Well, princess, enjoy your sweet and "dangerous" high school life,
and the everlasting memories that follow.

By the way, I am . . . umm, sorry, I can't tell you my name yet.
See you at Moulin Academy!!

Indonesian

"Love Academy"

Game Otome baru "Love Academy"!

Halo, puteri cantik. Sudah siap belum?

Yang berkumpul di SMA Moulin Academy, sebuah sekolah swasta, adalah mereka yang berprestasi dan berbakat dari seluruh dunia . Mengapa si gadis biasa ikut hadir di sekolah ini?

Di tengah atraksi kembang api pada suatu pesta topeng, sebuah pertemuan romantis tak terduga terjadi.

Lalu berlanjut dengan kejutan manis: lamaran di bawah pohon cherry yang sedang berbunga!

Ia pernah menikmati makan siang di atas atap bersama dengan sang pangeran tampan.

Begitulah, puteri, nikmati kehidupan SMA-mu yang manis dan "penuh petualangan" serta semua kenangan tak terlupakan yang mengiringi.

Oya, namaku... mmm, maaf, aku belum bisa beritahu namaku sekarang.
Sampai jumpa di Moulin Academy!!

Reviews ( 1 )

dheeann 61 * Translate ISO 9001:2000 documents (...
dheeann rated this translation result as ★★★★ 17 Jan 2013 at 16:14

The translation is good enough, but i have a bit better translation for :
"Outstanding and talented students from around the world have
gathered together at Moulin Academy High School, a private
institution. Why was this ordinary girl attending the academy?"

Indonesian :
Murid-murid yang memiliki prestasi dan bakat luar biasa dari seluruh penjuru dunia telah berkumpul di sebuah sekolah swasta, Moulin Academy High School. Mengapa gadis yang biasa ini turut hadir di sekolah ini?

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gandinsuga gandinsuga 17 Jan 2013 at 20:01

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