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Japanese

激しい吹雪の中、少年は描きあげた絵を手にして彼女家に向かうのだが・・・

English

In a hard snowstorm, he hurried her home with his painting completed, but ...

Reviews ( 2 )

elephantrans rated this translation result as ★★★★ 05 Oct 2013 at 15:24

original
In a hard snowstorm, he hurried her home with his painting completed, but ...

corrected
In a hard snowstorm, he hurries her home with his painting completed, but ...

The original sentense sounds telling the basic idea of a story.

yukari0101 rated this translation result as ★★★★ 07 Mar 2014 at 12:50

わかりやすいです。