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Rating: 52 / Native Portuguese (Brazil) / 1 Review / 14 Jul 2023 at 11:36

dan1984
dan1984 52
Japanese

とても貴重な音楽ファイルを送ってくれてありがとうございます。まだ外出先に居ますので家に帰ってから聴きます。とても楽しみです。実は私は〇〇さんともコンタクトを取りましたが彼は音楽ファイルを持っていませんでした。そして彼は今、体調が良くないとも言ってました。元気になる事を祈っています。

English

Thank you so much for sending me the extremely valuable music files. I'm still out and about, so I'll listen to them when I get home. I'm really excited. Actually, I reached out to Mr. XX as well, but he didn't have any music files. And he mentioned that he's not feeling well now. I pray for his health to improve.




Reviews ( 1 )

karekora 57 ご利用をいただき、誠にありがとうございます。 *** ご存知の...
karekora rated this translation result as ★★★★★ 17 Jan 2024 at 04:16

original
Thank you so much for sending me the extremely valuable music files. I'm still out and about, so I'll listen to them when I get home. I'm really excited. Actually, I reached out to Mr. XX as well, but he didn't have any music files. And he mentioned that he's not feeling well now. I pray for his health to improve.




corrected
Thank you so much for sending me the extremely valuable music files. I'm still out and about, so I'll listen to them when I get home. I'm really excited. Actually, I reached out to 〇〇 as well, but they didn't have any music files. 〇〇 mentioned that they aren’t feeling well at the moment. I hope they get better soon.




It isn’t clear if 〇〇 is a man or a woman from the context, so I changed it to gender neutral incase.

dan1984 dan1984 17 Jan 2024 at 23:03

As it is written "彼" is usually male and 彼女 is female. Because there is "彼ら" which is used for both despite there being "彼女ら".

karekora karekora 17 Jan 2024 at 23:05

Very true - I take back my adjustments to make it gender neutral. I would only change the last sentence to make it a little more natural (although your sentence is understandable). Apologies for the inconvenience caused.

dan1984 dan1984 17 Jan 2024 at 23:12

Thank you, every day is a learning experience :)

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