Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Additional info: 当店は風俗店です。一度選択した女性キャストを「変更」「キャンセル」はできません、という注意喚起の文章です。

Japanese

・女性キャストがお出迎えした後は、プレイ料金は返金いたしません。

English

Once the hostess has greeted you, the playing fee is non-refundable.

Reviews ( 1 )

karekora rated this translation result as ★★★★ 16 Jan 2024 at 07:02

original
Once the hostess has greeted you, the playing fee is non-refundable.

corrected
• Payment is non-refundable as soon as the hostess has greeted you.

I would say changing the order of the clause is more natural in English? It doesn’t make much difference in terms of understanding though. Great translation.

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Thank you for the helpful advice.